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8. How do I increase word count in a finished project?

  • BrandonRobinsonWrites
  • Feb 8, 2024
  • 1 min read

First, my general conviction is that, just adding in content to bulk up word count is bad news. It’s probably going to feel artificial to the reader. But I do have an experience where I took a 10k word novella and turned it into a 40k word story. To do this, I had to completely expand and reimagine my story. My novella centered around a group of students inventing an RPG poetry game (think of a light Dungeons and Dragons where players are poets, writing poems, instead of warriors and wizards) and eventually getting it used in a high school classroom. Later, as I reimagined this story, I started with a student with mental health issues reading Kafka’s Metamorphosis (with themes of social outcast and social anomaly) who meets a dimensional being seeking to give him life counsel. This student then goes to a high school where the poetry club is developing the RPG poetry game. The faculty thinks the game is too fun-oriented—so the theme of outcast and anomaly which is experienced by my student with mental health issues is echoed on an organizational/institutional level, as the poetry club students argue with their teachers to have this fun, educational game incorporated into classroom practice, and are eventually shut down. Like I said, I went from 10k words to 40k words, but I had to reimagine the story and its major themes.  

 
 
 

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Let us close on a principle.
 We must stop rushing around the normal routine, and look beneath the surface.  

Beneath the surface is the mind world. Beneath the surface is the heart world. This is the place where shimmering starlight wanders through shadowed forests. The place were words and actions strengthen and enrich lives, instead of just getting us through the day. We have to move beyond function, and economy, and routine, and stress, and want, and enjoyment, and comfort. We have to find the lonely beaches, where the white sand shimmers beneath the silver moon, and the fathomless sea whispers to us of the rich depths life can know, and the glorious heights it can attain. Everyday we wake up, and we drink our coffee, and we step into the wild landscape of the surface world, and we resolve its questions and we satisfy its demands and we try to improve its circumstances...but it is not necessarily where we live.  

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