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11. Is it a problem if I have a character who I do not wish to describe?

  • BrandonRobinsonWrites
  • Feb 15, 2024
  • 1 min read

Hi, so, as a writer, I am weak at describing characters. I generally don’t do it. In my recent book, I know there are no direct descriptions of things like facial features and age. So, my style, this style, suggests descriptions are not critical. Where it became a little tricky, I had certain scenes where some degree of character description was helpful to developing the scene. At a funeral, for example, I couldn’t just say “everyone wore black” (how boring) … and adding some extra detail, like “black like a galaxy of stars” and “black like the abyss of the void” compared to “an outfit that was department store black” helped to demonstrate the mentalities of some characters I was introducing.  

 
 
 

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 We must stop rushing around the normal routine, and look beneath the surface.  

Beneath the surface is the mind world. Beneath the surface is the heart world. This is the place where shimmering starlight wanders through shadowed forests. The place were words and actions strengthen and enrich lives, instead of just getting us through the day. We have to move beyond function, and economy, and routine, and stress, and want, and enjoyment, and comfort. We have to find the lonely beaches, where the white sand shimmers beneath the silver moon, and the fathomless sea whispers to us of the rich depths life can know, and the glorious heights it can attain. Everyday we wake up, and we drink our coffee, and we step into the wild landscape of the surface world, and we resolve its questions and we satisfy its demands and we try to improve its circumstances...but it is not necessarily where we live.  

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