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5. How do you write an interesting opening to a chapter of a book?

  • BrandonRobinsonWrites
  • Feb 8, 2024
  • 1 min read

So, this is a broad question. In the end, I think there are a lot of ways to introduce a story in an interesting, compelling way. The beginning sentences just have to give the reader something they are drawn into to know more. So, if I were to rifle off an example, an introduction could look like this:


-The card game was over, and Rick had taken his winnings and drifted into the shadows before things could become hostile. He looked at the map, the small treasure for which he had bluffed his precious family crest. If the rumors were true, this was a map to Haven’s Gate. He squinted his eyes. If somehow he could decipher these cryptic runes, maybe he could get out of this in one piece.


So, give the reader something they can wonder about, details that point toward more layers and larger complexity. What does this mean? What could happen here? How will that play out? That sounds dangerous/wondrous/challenging/mystical etc., what’s going on?

 
 
 

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Let us close on a principle.
 We must stop rushing around the normal routine, and look beneath the surface.  

Beneath the surface is the mind world. Beneath the surface is the heart world. This is the place where shimmering starlight wanders through shadowed forests. The place were words and actions strengthen and enrich lives, instead of just getting us through the day. We have to move beyond function, and economy, and routine, and stress, and want, and enjoyment, and comfort. We have to find the lonely beaches, where the white sand shimmers beneath the silver moon, and the fathomless sea whispers to us of the rich depths life can know, and the glorious heights it can attain. Everyday we wake up, and we drink our coffee, and we step into the wild landscape of the surface world, and we resolve its questions and we satisfy its demands and we try to improve its circumstances...but it is not necessarily where we live.  

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